Yesterday
on Wednesday we were training for rugby. It was hard, I never thought
it would be that hard. We ran around the field three times.
I
was so tired I tried to take a shortcut. Then we took a rest just for
30 seconds, then we stretched and practicing doing the scum. Some of
the year eight’s had to get down.
And the year seven girls do a acle. Then the bell rang. The girls made a cheer.
Hey Vanessa,
ReplyDeleteYour first post for this year is very good. It's nice to see you back at our school. I liked your post about your rugby training. You persuasive writing led me to reading more. Although there are a few errors in it, it is still a good post. Keep up the great work Vanessa. Have a great time in this school.
Your Friend,
Makerita
Thanks for the comment and thanks for telling me about the errors our fix it.
ReplyDeleteHey Vanessa
ReplyDeleteit me your best friend Serena what a great story you have about your rugby training it cool to see you back at school
keep it up my best friend. NICE JOB.
Thanks for committing on my blog nice to see YOU at SCHOOL.
DeleteYou Friend Vanessa